元の動画は、混沌ツクラーP様が作りました・ Original video created by Konton-Tsukuraa-P: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21467163 (July 2013 ver.)

元の日本語字幕をよく見えるために、sm21467163を見てください。 To watch her body without obstructing subtitles, please use Firefox!

作詞:アスカ様・ Lyrics: Asuka: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm11188659 (2011 ver.)

作曲・動画:混沌ツクラーP様・ Music & Video: Konton-Tsukuraa-P

唄:CUL・ Vocals: CUL

英語翻訳:俺・ Translation & Romaji: me

ビデオタイトル文法チェック:may555様・ Video title grammar checking: may555: http://ecchi.iwara.tv/users/may555

混沌ツクラーP様に 翻訳 転載の ご許可を 頂いました。ですから どうも ありがとう ございました。 Thank you Konton-Tsukuraa-P for your kind permission to re-upload translated versions of your videos.

Please visit Konton-Tsukuraa-P's ero-game download station: http://www.interq.or.jp/cool/fs2000/page002.html
and his Iwara channel: http://ecchi.iwara.tv/users/r18xyz
and his YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/kosori2010/videos?view=0&sort=p&flow=list
and his NicoNico channel: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21467163/videoExplorer
(Note: His NicoNico channel is much more adult than his YouTube channel, and has more videos too, over 400.)

Please visit my YouTube channel as well: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC5M5hlMQjhR_QvoRoQ1aD7Q
and the smut channel with my R-18 translations: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCxGj3PQrKnv0_eZAQBGwZxQ

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There exist three versions of this song:

The 2011 Luka version. Old lyrics ver:
【巡音ルカ】風呂場でドッピュン♪【オリジナル】
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm14084696

The July 2013 CUL version. New lyrics ver:
【東方MMD】風呂場でドッピュン♪【CUL変態紳士向け曲】
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm21467163

The December 2013 Merli version. New lyrics ver:
【東方MMD】風呂場でドッピュン♪【メルリ紳士向け曲】
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm22529281

The Luka version might well appear at YouTube before 2017? To not miss it, please subscribe to this channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCxGj3PQrKnv0_eZAQBGwZxQ

(The only difference between the CUL and Merli videos is the voices of the singers. I find Merli’s voice slightly harder to hear than CUL’s, in the exactly similar background music. I picked the CUL version for this reason, since my own language training is an important reason to translate these videos. Furthermore, the CUL version has three times more views than the Merli version. Everyone knows that Miku’s and Rin’s voices are able to ‘cut through’ louder background music than Luka’s voice. It might be the same situation for CUL v.s. Merli?)

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sm11188659には、 混沌ツクラーP様が これと書きました:

変態の彼氏を持つルカさんに歌っていただきました。夜のお店のプレイの真似事をしているようです。イラスト  紅い鈴さん  うらら~さん 曲  混沌ツクラー  /mylist/17507667

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sm21467163には、 混沌ツクラーP様が これと書きました:

変態紳士向けです。 一般人は来てはいけません>< 一般人には意味不明な内容が多々あります。  変態の彼氏を持つ女性が 夜のお店の真似事をお願いさ れてます。  決めセリフは ドッピュン♪ そして 宝石ブラです。 ボーカル音源はCULです。 よろしくお願いします。 ちなみに ちるのさんの彼氏 は不明です>< 

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sm28178411には、 混沌ツクラーP様が これと書きました:

変態カップルの歌ですので紳士向けです><  ボーカルは メルリ(Merli)です。 発売記念に歌って頂きました。  さきっぽは 宝石ブラです。 

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Translation notes:

“Doppyun” was hard to translate. Here is how I did it:

“Do” is SFX for missile ejection, like a bullet being shot from a gun: http://thejadednetwork.com/sfx/search/?keyword=do&submitSearch=Search+SFX&x
“Pyun” is SFX for the high, whining sound of a bullet whizzing by: http://thejadednetwork.com/sfx/search/?keyword=pyun&submitSearch=Search+...
So “do” + “pyun” = “doppyun” = “Boom-Whiz”?

This gives me four possible English titles:
1. Geyser Explosions in the Bathroom; (Len ejaculates)
2. Boom-Whiz in the Bathroom; (The sound heard when Len ejaculates)
3. Strong Showers in the Bathroom; (Len’s semen halfway in mid-air)
4. Splashy Facials in the Bathroom; (After semen landing, the result of Len’s ejaculations)

It seems that Japanese porn video directors and ero manga artists generally are using the type #2 word to describe the type #4 situation, (like if the English word “boom-whiz” meant a “splashy facial”).

I always prefer the most amusing title. #3 is slightly amusing with its dual meaning of water showers and semen showers. #1 is more fun, being a totally over-the-top description of an ejaculation. The nice thing is that a real exploding geyser would cause a “doppyun”/”boom-whiz” sound, and also look like an ejaculation.

All text above is only worries about the video title. In the actual lyrics, I translated “doppyun” outside the pussy as “splashy facial”, and “doppyun” inside the pussy as “geyser explosion”.

Afterwards, may555 from Japan confirmed that my "Boom-Whiz" theory was actually correct. Thank you for your help, may555: http://ecchi.iwara.tv/users/may555

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Links used for the translation:

Initial googling of ドッピュン = “doppyun” led me to Wikipedia: https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%A1%94%E5%B0%84 . The only Wikipedia occurrence of the word “doppyun” is at the bottom of that page, in this porn video title:
LOVE◆ドッピュン!! メガ顔射スペシャル! = LOVE◆Doppyun!! Mega Facial Special!
Already this hints that “doppyun” is closely connected with facials.

I read the two mangas I could find with “doppyun” in the title. Here is the first one, translated to:
http://lofi.e-hentai.org/g/648873/cacb5e9f09/ Spanish
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/607983/830d9251bc/ Thai
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/314869/50a5d3e572/ English
Note that the Spanish and Tai versions have the word “Doppyun” in the title, whereas it has been dropped in the English title.

Here is the second manga, un-translated: http://g.e-hentai.org/g/113062/ebfad7b2d8/

After reading those manga, it seems quite obvious that “doppyun” is a code word for that sort of facial when a girl’s face is TOTALLY drenched in semen.

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English lyrics: Furuba de Doppyun / Geyser Explosions in the Bathroom

(Stars mark the lines that has been changed since the 2011 Luka version.)

He has a wonderful smile,
my gentle boyfriend.
He always holds my hand
when we are walking.
At the end of our date,
we’re going to a hotel today,
even though my room
would be good enough.
I want to become closer to you
and become one with you.
I want to experience this
dressed in a negligee.
I enticed my boyfriend:
"If you love me, then help me
to get rid of my virginity"

We are on the bed and
I'm not used to kissing.
I'm blushing while we undress each other.
When I'm touched by you, my body gets so hot deep inside!
You’re giving my breasts gentle massage.
Please nibble my strawberries (nipples) thoroughly
It feels like electricity is running through my entire body.
You've opened my pussy
and it feels so good when its inside is caressed by your tongue. :)

This time, I'll do it for you.
I'll rub it for you, snugly buried in my cleavage.
My tongue tip is shivering on your glans.
This is enough preparations, right?
You shift my knickers aside, and ***
begin to insert it in from the side. ***
Don't stick it in like that. (sideways)
Insert it here bit by bit to my deepest parts.
I'll be fine even if it hurts,
since it's with you.
Pierce me deeply
and hold me tight.
Please move slowly in my fresh blood of defloration
My pussy is so hot,
it’s about to split!

My body is hot like it’s burning.
It hurts, but I’m incredibly happy.
After changing position,
in my secret honey crack,
your 'thing' is at my
deepest part, my womb!
You can reach it. :)
You're clapping it. :)
Even though it's my first time,
I'm feeling it.
I guess you’ll spurt soon?
I’ll lock my legs around you.
Without pulling out, let
your geyser explode deep inside me. :) ***

Do you want to try a 'bathroom play'?
I'm going to stroke your penis like in a 'Soapland', :)
and your whole body with my large breasts and secret honey crack.
I'll give you both washing and masturbation. :)
Let's have a titty fuck with fellatio and a splashy facial. :)
I'm going to wash your 'thing' for you, with my secret honey crack. :)
From missionary position
to reverse cowgirl, and then
a geyser explosion. :)

Were you backed up?
Inside my secret honey crack
it's all gushing out
while we are connected.
Your white milk is overflowing,
spilled out like a lubricant,
because I begged for it. (raw semen) ***
In the bathtub, your 'thing' is floating:
It’s a periscope! ***
My mouth swallows it deeply. ***
Washing you with my 'scrub brush', (pubic hair)
'washing' your toes and fingers inside my vagina,
I'm making bubbles dance,
as a 'crane girl' repaying your kindness. (a tale reference)
Let's 'unite' with crossed legs!

Real sex with cream pies,
and afterwards it's the "Penis Purification".
I'll clean your penis with my mouth and
suck out any remaining juices for you. :)
I'm working your body with the soup, and then...
Are you 'on the road' again?
Good grief! :)
You pervert! :)
I'm doing well as your girlfriend, right? :)
Let's continue in the bed, right? :)
On the table, meant to be pure for meals,
you're really a lecher! :)
You'll expose your real nature for the one you love.
I love you!
Don't ever leave me.

[Note: knickers (UK) = panties (US)]

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Romaji:

egao ga suteki na
yasashii kare
itsu mo te o totte
aruite kureru
deeto no owari wa
kyou wa hoteru
watashi no heya demo
iin da kedo ne
chikaku ni itai
hitotsu ni naritai
keiken shitai
neguriju sugata de
kare o sasotta no
watashi no koto ga suki nara
junketsu chirashite

beddo no ue de
narenai kisu
o-tagai nugasete
makka ni naru no
furerare
karada no oku ga atsui yo
yasashiku mune o
momare
ichigo o amakami
sare-chau to ne
zenshin biru tto
denki ga hashiru no
asoko o hirakare
naka o shita de
aibu sareru to
kimochi ii :)

kondo wa watashi ga
shite ageru
tanima ni suppori
suri-ageru
shita-saki shiro-shiro
junbi wa ii ne?
pantsu o zurashite ***
yoko kara sounyuu ***
sore wa tsukenaide
sono mama de
watashi no oku made
haitte kite
itaku demo heiki
anata to dakara
oku made tsuki-komi
tsuyoku daite
haka no senketsu
yukkuri ugoite
asoko ga atsukute
sake-sou yo

karada ga moeru you ni
atsui
itai kedo
sugoku shiawase
tai'i kae-nagara
himitsu no wareme
anata no mon ga!
oku no shikyuu made
todoku no :)
tataiteru yo :)
hajimete na no ni
kanjiteru
de-sou na no?
ashi o karameru
nukasenai
oku de doppyun :) ***

furoba de purei
shite mitai no ne?
are o shigoku no
soupu no you ni :)
kyonyuu de himitsu no wareme de
zenshin
shigoite aratte
ageru :)
paizuri ferachio
doppyun shite ne :)
himitsu no wareme de
anata no mon o
aratte ageru :)
seijou-i kara
bakku ni kijou-i
doppyun yo :)

tamatte ita no?
himitsu no wareme no
naka ni subete
hotobashiru
ketsugou bubun
shiroi miruku ga
afure-dashi-kobore
junkatsu-zai ni
anata ni o-negai ***
sareta kara ***
yubune ni ukabu
anata no mon
senboukyou yo ***
o-kuchi de nomi-komu ***
tawashi arai ni
tsubo arai ni
awa-odori shite
tsuru no ongaeshi
ashi o kousa ni
ketsugou yo

honban nakadashi
sono ato wa
"o-kiyome"
are o kuchi de kirei ni
sui-dashite ageru
nokori no shiru o :)
watashi ga soupu de
hataraite'tara
anata wa kayou no?
mou :) hentai :)
watashi ga kanojo de
yokatta ne :)
tsudzuki wa beddo de
shi-chaou ne :)
omote wa seijun
honto wa sukebe
suki na hito ni wa
honshou sarasu
anata ga suki yo
hanasanaide

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Kanji:

笑顔が素敵な
優しい彼
いつも手を取って
歩いてくれる
デートの終わりは
今日はホテル
私の部屋でも
いいんだけどね
近くにいたい
一つになりたい
経験したい
ネグリジュ 姿で
彼を誘ったの
私のことが好きなら
純潔散らして

ベッドの上で
慣れないキス
お互い脱がせて
真っ赤になるの
触れられ
体の奥が熱いよ
優しく胸を
揉まれ
イチゴを甘噛み
されちゃうとね
全身ビルっと
電気が走るの
アソコを開かれ
中を舌で
愛撫されると
気持ちいい :)

今度は私が
してあげる
谷間にスッポリ
擦りあげる
舌先シロシロ
準備はいいね?
パンツをずらして ***
横から挿入 ***
ソレは付けないで
そのままで
私の奥まで
入ってきて
痛くでも平気
あなたとだから
奥まで突き込み
強く抱いて
破瓜の鮮血
ゆっくり動いて
アソコが熱くて
裂けそうよ

体が燃えるように
熱い
痛いけど
すごく幸せ
体位変えながら
秘蜜の割れ目
あなたのモンが!
奥の子部屋まで
届くの :)
叩いてるよ :)
初めてなのに
感じてる
出そうなの?
脚を絡める
抜かせない
奥でドッピュン :) ***

風呂場でプレイ
してみたいのね?
アレをしごくの
ソープのように :)
巨乳で秘蜜の割れ目で
全身
しごいて洗って
あげる :)
パイズリ フェラチオ
ドッピュンしてね :)
秘蜜の割れ目で
あなたのモンを
洗ってあげる :)
正常位から
バックに騎乗位
ドッピュンよ :)

溜まっていたの?
秘蜜の割れ目の
膣(なか)にすべて
ほとばしる
結合部分
白いミルクが
溢れ出しこぼれ
潤滑剤に
あなたにお願い ***
されたから ***
湯船に浮かぶ
あなたのモン
潜望鏡よ ***
お口で呑み込む ***
たわし洗に
壺洗に
泡踊りして
鶴の恩返し
足を交差に
結合よ

本番中出し
その後は
「お清め」
アレを口で綺麗に
吸い出してあげる
残りの汁を :)
私がソープで
働いてたら
あなたは通うの?
もう :) 変態 :)
私が彼女で
よかったね :)
続きはベッドで
しちゃおうね :)
表は清純
ホントはスケベ
好きな人には
本性晒す
あなたが好きよ
離さないで

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