I started this one a while ago but just now got around to finishing it. To me it feels... Empty like it's missing something :/

So depending on feedback I may change some things and re-upload it

Enjoy!

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Very good

I think its fine.

:D Shweet

It is good, but yeh it is missing something. Cant quite put my finger on it tho. Her clothes and looks are excellent, background is average but the colours do match her nicely. Maybe background? the rest seems very good to me.

I'll try and mess with the background a bit. The only thing is If I mess with the background I'll have to redo the lighting

Thanks tho!

Looks good.

Nice!

裸にサスペンダー!こういうの大好き!!

:P

nice model and strip, but dance and music are displaced! Other video is so ,too.

I love the lighting in this, the vid is really catchy!

Nice to meet you.
There is one question.
How does this eyes shine?
Also, from this eyes to the other side

Eyes have autoluminous and ikcinemorph blue on them

It's good, but she doesn't blink. Maybe that's what's missing?

Hmm weird before I saved to avi they did blink. I think something got messed up. I didn't even notice until you said something

It's the eyes. There's no life to them. As such, it leaves her rather expressionless. Everything else is fine IMO.

Verry good job,thank you.

Nice job. The nopan portion is greatly appreciated!

uhm, the video is missing sex :L make David dance with her. Or leave it as it is, since i like it allrdy :)