Yuri is something I wish I could do better in MMD. So here is some practice. I used some pose data as a starting base. So these poses are not 100% my work. I have no idea how to make models look like they are kissing properly, so I need way more practice there. I promise I am better at it in real life than how this looks, haha.

If anyone is interested in the models, the one on the right is iwara user Ley Line Walker's Minami OC.
The one on the left is my own OC that he is making for me, named Yuka. Yuka will be given out freely when she is more complete.

1,037

コメント数 7

I find it works better if I view it as them separating after the sloppy makeout, all dazed and tongues still extended, as opposed to going in for one. The water droplets look a little weird to me, but honestly it'd probably look weird IRL if you stopped a shower in time. Now I'm just imagining that and it's freaking me out.

Definitely need more sloppy makeouts around here, though. If you manage to get a saliva trail working, please warn me ahead of time so I can change into some shitty pants I don't mind utterly ruining.

Oh! I completely forgot the saliva model I have! Thank you for reminding me. That's actually something I'm really into personally, so I can't believe a chance to use it like this slipped my mind.

Anyway, thank you for the criticism. I really appreciate it. The water kinda made sense to me, since for me it kinda looked like some of it was against the glass or something. But I can see what you mean. The shower was honestly a last minute idea. I was just messing around with making them have sex, and I just liked the kissing pose data I had, and I was like, 'well, where can I even put them?' And shower ended up being what I went with.

But yeah, overall I'm definite not very happy with my work on this one, and I need a TON of improvement with yuri stuff.

It's not bad, but it's definitely not your best work. It's a good kissing pose, and I like the half-lidded eyes in the facial expression we can see. The hands feel kind of uncertain, but that's actually a positive, because it gives an impression of somewhat trepidatious spontaneity.

So there's definitely stuff here to work with. It can surely be polished, revised, and improved upon, but the foundation you've got is pretty solid.

You may not think it looks bad. But for me, I almost didn't upload it because I'm so unhappy with it. Yuri is my favorite, and I'm so bad at it in MMD. I think mainly because the scale size of the heads and bodies just don't make sense to me compared to how I would see it in my head or something. The only reason I did upload this was that I was hoping if other people saw it, they would at least speak up and give me some ideas how to do this better. Which you did, so I'm happy about that, haha.

I will try to work on the post-kissing thing you mentioned though. I'll have to come up with a different stage and all that to work with it, but it can be done. Someone else mentioned having them doing oral together, and the saliva would work for that now that I remembered it, and so on. So maybe I'll work on a set. Who knows!

I'll admit my standards are likely more forgiving than the ones you've set for yourself. Not that holding yourself to a higher standard is bad, though. After all, if none of us did that, we'd all have angry stalkers hating on our forum posts. ;D Perhaps our grammar would deteriorate, too.

Glad to hear I've done my part in bringing more saliva-slicked passion to this world. I can sleep deeply tonight.

Where did you download the model of the blue-haired girl?

That's Ley Line Walker's OC.